DOCTEAM-1303: Securing systemd services #371
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@Amrita42 Many thanks! I'm struggling a bit with section 2. (id="systemd-example-secure-service") and section 2.1 (id="improving-overall-exposure") in the article (see remarks). 2.1 is a 'lone section' (there is no 2.2 or 2.3) which the style guide suggests to avoid. Maybe you can find a way to solve that.
| <title>How to improve the overall exposure with options?</title> | ||
| <para>Use the command <command>systemd-analyze security</command> to analyze the security settings of a | ||
| &systemd; service. For example: </para> | ||
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It's the same example like in the previous section (which is good in terms of consistency) but if you have a look at the PDF or HTML output both examples follow each other directly (end of p.4 and beginning of p.5). Therefore it looks to reader like content that is duplicated without a good reason. I would rather omit the example output here and instead give show how to run the systemd-analyze security command with one of the following options (so the readers have a concrete example to cling to before you give them the reference list of options.
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So here my intention was to highlight the previous example output and how to make it safe using the options .
I think based on more research , I will re-work this part and add more
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Yes , based on existing content
https://documentation.suse.com/smart/security/html/systemd-securing/index.html#systemd-securing-techniques