Editorial suggestions for abstract and intro #49
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kazuho
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Nov 22, 2023
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@kazuho @marten-seemann good to go? |
| application immediately, without providing any stream data it has received for | ||
| that stream. | ||
| Version 1 of the QUIC transport protocol ({{!QUIC=RFC9000}}) provides | ||
| streams, an ordered and reliable byte stream. Once a sender has started to emit |
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That's a weird mix of singular and plural in this sentence.
kazuho
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Dec 1, 2023
| application immediately, without providing any stream data it has received for | ||
| that stream. | ||
| Version 1 of the QUIC transport protocol ({{!QUIC=RFC9000}}) provides | ||
| streams, an ordered and reliable byte stream. Once a sender has started to emit |
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@marten-seemann if you are concerned about that, maybe something like:
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| streams, an ordered and reliable byte stream. Once a sender has started to emit | |
| byte-oriented streams that are ordered and reliable. Once a sender has started to emit |
It's almost a duplicate of the first sentence of the abstract, but hopefully nobody cares.
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I merged too quickly. Byte-oriented? I've never heard this term before.
Maybe better: reliable byte-ordered streams.
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We could go for “byte streams that are ordered and reliable,” if oriented sounds unfamiliar.
Co-authored-by: Kazuho Oku <[email protected]>
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We can deal with this as part of shepherd writeup |
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This is intended to be a rewording of the text to align with how other QUIC extensions have come out of the RFC editor.
Also I tried to tighten up the explanation of exactly what range data is reliable.